There were forty Stygians, well-mounted warriors in helms and chain-mail hauberks (было сорок стигийцев, на хороших лошадях: «хорошо конных» воинов в шлемах и кольчужных кольчугах =
marauder [m'r: d], tough [tf], shrewd [ru: d]
There were forty Stygians, well-mounted warriors in helms and chain-mail hauberks. They were tall, swarthy, hawk-faced men, powerfully muscled. They were hardened marauders — tough, shrewd, fearless, and merciless, with no more compunction about killing a non-Stygian than most men have about slapping a gnat.
Now the first downpour of the storm swept their column (теперь первый ливень грозы разметал их колонну). Winds whipped their woolen cloaks and linen robes and blew their horses' manes into their faces (ветры секли их шерстяные плащи и льняные одежды и били гривами /их/ лошадей в их лица;
swept [swept], linen ['lnn], blew [blu:]
Now the first downpour of the storm swept their column. Winds whipped their woolen cloaks and linen robes and blew their horses' manes into their faces. The almost continuous blaze of lightning dazzled them.
Their leader sighted the black castle, looming above the grasslands, for the blazing lightning made it visible in the rain-veiled dark (их предводитель заметил черный замок, вырисовывающийся над лугами, ибо сверкающая молния сделала его видимым в скрытой дождем темноте). He shouted a guttural command and drove his spurs into the ribs of his big black mare (он прокричал гортанную команду и вонзил /свои/ шпоры в ребра своей крупной черной кобылы). The others spurred after him and rode up to the frowning bastions (остальные пришпорили за ним и поскакали к хмурым бастионам;
mare [m], hoof [hu: f], jingle [l]
Their leader sighted the black castle, looming above the grasslands, for the blazing lightning made it visible in the rain-veiled dark. He shouted a guttural command and drove his spurs into the ribs of his big black mare. The others spurred after him and rode up to the frowning bastions with a clatter of hoofs, a creaking of leather, and a jingle of mail. In the blur of rain and night, the abnormality of the facade was not visible, and the Stygians were eager to get under shelter before they were soaked.
They came stamping in, cursing and bellowing and shaking the water from their cloaks (они вошли, топая, внутрь, ругаясь и рыча, и стряхивая воду со своих плащей). In a trice, the gloomy silence of the ruin was broken with a clamor of noise (вмиг мрачная тишина руин была прервана криком шума =
paint [pent], rich [rt], orange ['rn]